Jeannine, Great research. I know that the moment I completed my video I thought of numerous ways I would have liked to have improved my presentation. I wonder what you would have worked on. It seems that technology prevented you from easily meeting the assignment requirements, how would you deal with this now? My only constructive feedback relates to the tone of your voice and the amount of text competing with your visuals.
What I like best is the fact that you didn't give up and produced a great deliverable. I've went to our assigned community, and it appears that we are the only ones so far that posted. If you're like me you've learned a lot and will probably be an expert the next opportunity around due to the barriers that were encountered. Good job!
Sondra, Thanks, it was not an easy task. The technology portion threw me for a loop at first. I have definately learned some things!
Jodi, After looking back at the video and others, I noticed I had much more text than others. Being I never did anything like this before, I learned from my experience.
Hi Jeannine, I think your presentation was informative and I learned a lot. I would suggest that you not put your complete narrative on the slides and instead put majority of the narrative text in the "notes" section. That would make it so much more engaging for the audience. Your voice clarity was excellent and the pictures that you chose were eye pleasing. Overall I enjoyed watching your video and I learned alot about collaboration!! Neena
You did a great job! I could definitely tell that you did very thorough research based on the information contained in your presentation. The graphics you chose were wonderful, and the only advice I can offer for the next presentation you create is to lessen the amount of text on each slide. Again, great job!
Congratulations Jeannine -- I see you found a way to preserve the animation in your Powerpoint. Good job.
ReplyDeleteJeannine, Great research. I know that the moment I completed my video I thought of numerous ways I would have liked to have improved my presentation. I wonder what you would have worked on. It seems that technology prevented you from easily meeting the assignment requirements, how would you deal with this now? My only constructive feedback relates to the tone of your voice and the amount of text competing with your visuals.
ReplyDeleteJeannine,
ReplyDeleteWhat I like best is the fact that you didn't give up and produced a great deliverable. I've went to our assigned community, and it appears that we are the only ones so far that posted. If you're like me you've learned a lot and will probably be an expert the next opportunity around due to the barriers that were encountered. Good job!
Sondra,
ReplyDeleteThanks, it was not an easy task. The technology portion threw me for a loop at first. I have definately learned some things!
Jodi, After looking back at the video and others, I noticed I had much more text than others. Being I never did anything like this before, I learned from my experience.
Debbie,
Thanks for the encouragment!
Hi Jeannine,
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation was informative and I learned a lot. I would suggest that you not put your complete narrative on the slides and instead put majority of the narrative text in the "notes" section. That would make it so much more engaging for the audience. Your voice clarity was excellent and the pictures that you chose were eye pleasing. Overall I enjoyed watching your video and I learned alot about collaboration!!
Neena
Cheryl:
ReplyDeleteYou did a wonderful job. This was a difficult assignment and you did your research well. It shows, great job oganizing and illustrating here.
You did a great job! I could definitely tell that you did very thorough research based on the information contained in your presentation. The graphics you chose were wonderful, and the only advice I can offer for the next presentation you create is to lessen the amount of text on each slide. Again, great job!
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